realy liked the redo on 45 days.
more please
more please
Princess Alexandria - "Trinity Saga"
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 GrendelGraneson |
Re: 45 days | ||
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Posts: 1 (03/25/04 00:29:36) |
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MoonCatX |
Re: 60 days | ||
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Posts: 2175 (03/25/04 09:56:44) |
mmm...
Just went to save the original versions on your web page, and couldn't help re-reading some... Dang, now I remember what made me so absolutely addicted to your writing. *falls in love all over again* As I saved, I re-read Macbeth kidnapping Trini, and it made my blood absolutely go cold with fear for the character, even though I've read the whole thing, the drama and suspense were IMMEDIATE the moment I looked at the text. That is pretty special. It made my heart go THUMP and I have to make a conscious effort not to sit down and re-read the original version all over again. *whimper* But I wanna!!! However, now I am all geared up to read the revamp. *goes off to read the revamp* Mooncat >^,,^<
"It's carved from out the finest wood and strung with silver string/Only mortal trust or faerie dust can make my fiddle sing" |
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MoonCatX |
Re: 45 days | ||
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Posts: 2175 (03/25/04 14:49:07) |
Okay, read part two of 45 days. It's tight. I liked that, and had a solid feeling to it. I notice that the sex is a lot softer, and off screen as well.
Fox and Trini's first time is a lot less detailed. I'm happy that the window blowing incident was cut, but kind of sad that the raw passion was also trimmed out. One of the things that I really liked about the original story was the INTENSITY of the emotions and the attraction between Trini and her lovers. The scenes with Trini and Demona/Dominique are treasures though *^_^* yah! Still golden. Mmm... it's been so long since I had a Trini fix. wuff... Need more! Mooncat >^,,^<
"It's carved from out the finest wood and strung with silver string/Only mortal trust or faerie dust can make my fiddle sing" |
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Luna Wyrd |
Re: 45 days | ||
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Posts: 107 (03/25/04 18:30:26) |
Well, I have a plan for the sex scenes. I figure I mellowed the 45 days down, and Father's Shadow is actually pretty innocent, so those can go on ff.net to hook readers. Then the rest of the story can keep it's more explicit sex scenes, even if it narrows my readers a bit on the gfw.
I'm now ready to start a redo of Father's Shadow, which will be expanded a bit, but I won't start that until I have a chapter for another story I'm working on up. I'll try bouncing back and forth with the stories for a while and see if I can keep two things at once rolling. ************
Luna of Wyrdx3 It's gotta be Fate. |
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Kudgurdarea |
Re: Princess Alexandria - "Trinity Saga" | ||
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Posts: 4 (04/11/04 20:39:41) |
Fine story. I really like what you've done with the characters, though I would like to see Fox and Domi realize that Trinity has Multiple Personality Disorder.
Maybe a scene where Demona meets "the Captain" (surely there is another name for this personality?) and realizes this is the personality that she shot and later saved her? |
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Unregistered(d) |
Trinity Saga | ||
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Posts: 0 (05/20/06 15:50:37) |
My god. @_@ I think I've read, and re-read the Trinity Saga... three or for times compleatly through...
And every time I get to the end.. I keep wanting to know when the Winter Saga will start. Now I know that Princess is busy with her 500 miles X-men fanfic (which, I love compleatly) But D: I want more Trinity |
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revanstar |
Winter | ||
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Posts: 2 (08/21/07 22:44:40) |
I just read the Trinity Saga for the 5th or 6th time through about two months ago. And Princess, I know you just started another Gargoyles fanfiction [Which I can see myself getting into easily]... and I know you still have Summer Dayz to work on [Dayz is my hero <3].. and I think your working on a Buffy fanfic......
 But, fall 07' is almost here, and still, no winter saga for us devoted Trinity lovers.  I normally dont bother writers with pittiful pleading for more..But please Princess, surely, even if its just one chapter, you could maybe.. give us Trinity fans our fix for the cold harsh dark fall and winter a head
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Princess Alexandria |
Trinity | ||
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Posts: 471 (08/25/07 18:49:23) |
I'll be honest about my plans right now. My goal is to go back to unfinished fics and finish them, so that I will get to the point where I maybe have one fanfiction going on at a time and I can feel free to start some original fiction ideas I have. Now how I'm going about doing this is that I look at the unfinished fics and consider where my muse is and how much work I anticipate the fic needs. With this criteria, it is likely that Trinity will be the last one on the list. It also has a certain full circle about it, since it was the first one I ever did. I also feel a bit strange about Trinity the character at this point, because after writing for years I think her character is a bit too flawed, so writing her again is going to be challenging. Trinity is 'unbalanced' as a woman with her life might be, but her hostility is wearing at me. I feel she needs a slap down and as the author I don't want to go into writing for her story with that attitude, that would be unfair to her. I'm hoping more time and complete stories will help me to get some ideas of how to work with a Trinity that doesn't suffer from severe PMS attitude.
What can I say, I think now with years behind me that Dylan was right all along and now I have to figure out how to fix it. Do you hear that Dylan? You were right. |
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revanstar |
Re: Trinity | ||
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Posts: 2 (08/29/07 19:30:54) |
I think everyone who is a fan of the Trinity Saga understands your reasonings Princess. [I love Trinity, but often I feel she needs to be smacked around a few times...]
Besides, with a promise of finishing uncompleated fics, how can I complain? ^_^ Its worth the wait, just dont take too long.. Or else..... I shall become rather annoying |
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Dino1Draco |
Update on fanfiction.net | ||
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Posts: 1 (05/11/08 23:58:31) |
I see you updated on fanfiction.net is that any different from the Fanfic.Gargoyles.org website. I really love this story and just want to know.
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Posts: 1 (10/14/09 18:28:16) |
i lov e it and deepl wish for updates. I cant wait to see here more bout the 3rd ring
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